Sunday, February 21, 2016

Practice IOC






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Criterion A: I gave myself a 5 because I identified the basic context of the passage and author. I did not, however, identity any context of what was occurring in the time period in which The Handmaid's Tale was published in.

Criterion B: I gave myself a 4 because I talked about the effect of the literary techniques on the passage and the meaning, but I did not relate the effect to the reader.

Criterion C: I gave myself a 3 because my IOC was organized well enough to be mostly coherent, but I think that I could have done a better job of organizing the way I introduced each technique and how I described the passage as a whole.

Criterion D: I gave myself a 3 because my language was good, but it wasn't really elevated. I used sentence structure and tone to analyze the effect as well, but I could have gone more in-depth in my analysis.

1 comment:

  1. Kirami:
    - Bit more context needed- what happened before this passage?
    - Like that you looked at structure and comparison
    - Glad that you started over, but make sure it doesn't happen over and over :)
    - Great ideas presented- well-organized at end when you look at tone, syntax, etc. between the two flashbacks

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